Almost like a predator

May 28, 2012


If you take the time-line of spring. And imagine it from very far away. So that the time-line is squelched. Made brief. Perhaps a few hours. It must seem that some unseen force is reaching out, almost like a rash, and overcoming the planet. Almost like a predator.

And I have to cut it.

One Response to “Almost like a predator”

  1. leyaevelyn said

    Cool! The rites of spring. And summer. This piece works well with all the short sentences. Sometimes I find your excessive periods interfere, are just too contrived, but not here at all. When it works, it’s cool.

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